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Painting by Ferdinand French

On stage he struts in sequined costume, a plume of feathers cocked high on head A thespian poet of no account is ranting though his troupe boasts of his skill and talent But the look of a charlatan paints his face when he's alone. Heartache he embraces for he's aware that he's been misleading himself and his bleeding heart followers, the extras he casts to applaud his show. "Bravo! Bravo!" He paid them to sit in the audience shouting, and boasting on him while standing in ovation. They whistle for more, for his unearned encore. He promises, "I'll support you all one day." Foolish would-be, presume without a doubt that he's a man of his word, but that's absurd for actors such as he never share the limelight once the spotlight shines on a narcissist's face. What price does he pay for his moment of glory? The highest toll is the loss of a soul. Each bow he takes should give cause for worry that one day the bird catcher will collect his due. He'll barter with Satan for being haughtily boastful for being puffed up with pride, and for his crime the foolish one must relinquish his soul.

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Date: 5/5/2024 5:33:00 AM
Lin, a great poem, some will seek fame and fortune at any cost, and trample and use others along the way.
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Date: 5/5/2024 5:38:00 AM
Yep, and some do it just because they think it makes them look important. Thank you, and have a great Sunday.
Date: 5/4/2024 10:26:00 PM
First, and you know I love art, I love your posts of paintings even when they are not yours. The poem, this one is very well written, and you know I also loved it!
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Date: 5/5/2024 12:39:00 AM
I do know your love of art, besides yourself. Ha ha seriously, your eye for beautiful paintings shows up daily on your fb page. Yes, I’m aware you also enjoy poetry with an air of darkness. Thank you, Art.
Date: 5/4/2024 6:06:00 AM
The customary skill on display again...beautifully crafted with some profound observations of the human character. You have a gift Lin for putting together poems that appeal to ear, heart and mind.
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Date: 5/4/2024 6:55:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words about my poetry, Paul. I consider your comments as gifts... wonderfully inspiring to continue writing wherever my poetic travels roam. I'm truly delighted they appeal to your senses.
Date: 5/3/2024 9:33:00 PM
Clever write with deep meaning. Loved the use of imagery. This is a sad truth: many will sell their souls for adoration. Well done.
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Date: 5/4/2024 6:53:00 AM
Hi, Eileen! It's so nice to see you for it's been quite a while. Thanks for reading and leaving your kind thoughts. Hope you're well.
Date: 5/3/2024 3:39:00 PM
Delightful penning, dear Lin. You've captured a narcissistic thespian so well with words like 'unearned uncore, being puffed up with pride, etc.' I've known narcissistic folks who unknowingly relinquish their souls for a moment of glory. Kind of sad individuals. Well written poem with fluidity that makes for a smooth read. Enjoy your evening, dear Lin. hugs, Sara
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Date: 5/3/2024 5:13:00 PM
Hi, Sara and thanks for reading and commenting on this one. I feel like a ship, dead in the water on site lately. There's no current flowing, not even a ripple, or maybe it's just me. Have a terrific weekend. hugs.
Date: 5/3/2024 3:06:00 PM
Bravo, Bravo I can relate big time to this poetic thespian lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/3/2024 5:12:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Thespian, poet, whatever endeavor they pursue, the narcissist is only concerned with him/herself. Thanks, chick.

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