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Treasured Elixir

Flowers boasting lavender hues Send fragrant messages through the air Hoping for a butterfly's kiss Golden winged butterflies Are drawn to the fragrance And delight in the taste of this treasured elixir 4-30-2024

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Deb M

Date: 5/2/2024 2:53:00 PM

Such a delicate delightful poem Joseph! Debx

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/1/2024 9:20:00 PM

The poem transports me to a beautiful, aromatic garden. Thank you.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/30/2024 6:08:00 PM

Yes, butterflies are drawn to a flowers sweet nectar. Your thoughts are so beautiful, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/30/2024 4:58:00 PM

You've captured nature so beautifully. I liked the fluidity of your words which made for a delightful read. Liked 'butterfly's kiss.' Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 4/30/2024 8:44:00 AM

Delightful poem. Loved the butterfly kiss.

Silent One

Date: 4/30/2024 8:36:00 AM

Sounds beautiful, as nature is and you have captured it's grace so poetically here..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/30/2024 6:13:00 AM

A rewarding write, Joseph--gift of the season blossoming. Much enjoyed the inspiration of your poem.