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Thunder Storm

darkened heavy skies rain saturating the ground crashing clouds clapping

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Date: 11/5/2017 6:14:00 PM

A beautiful haiku Elizabeth of lovely imagery and alliteration. Excellent and enjoyed!

Date: 7/3/2017 9:07:00 AM

A haiku, heavy with emotion!

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 7/3/2017 12:17:00 PM

Thank you

Date: 7/2/2017 9:53:00 AM

Your poem makes pictures in my mind of past storms I've been in. One thought just leads to another, then to another. That;s the power of your haiku

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 7/2/2017 11:08:00 AM

Thank you Alfred

Date: 5/21/2017 7:00:00 PM

Lovely imagery and powerful use of alliteration! Well done! Regards, John.

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 5/22/2017 2:32:00 AM

Thank you John for visiting my poems.

Date: 4/26/2017 3:10:00 AM

I agree with Chris on this! A wonderful haiku!

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/26/2017 3:50:00 AM

Thank you for giving me your support through your comments? : )

Date: 4/25/2017 3:23:00 PM

You have definitely captured the essence of a thunderstorm in this wonderful Haiku.

Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/26/2017 2:34:00 AM

Thank you