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Written, May 3, 2024
For The Contest: 
“Pick a Line and Like a Hooked Fish Run With It”
Sponsor, John Lawless
Prompt, Line 3.  “They gathered outside my house…
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They gathered outside- I'm alone, and at my back window, I groan! I think- what is this my hubby will miss? Then, quickly I reach for my phone! "We're being invaded, my dear! Please quickly come home, for I fear these huge long-necked beasts are looking for feasts! Whatever they are- is unclear!” “I counted at least twenty-one now looking for food where there's none! It seemed a bad sign when their eyes met mine! The door's locked- so I need not run!" Some photos I send him to please; He views them, then texts me with ease- "Please, honey calm down! No need for a frown! Your so-called wild beasts are Turkeys!” Confusing, as I just recalled my Thanksgiving Turkeys were bald; came right from the store piled up with lots more! Not “beasts”- but OUR “feasts” - I'm appalled!

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Date: 5/3/2024 10:37:00 AM
Very funny, Sandra. Reminds me of a TV commercial I see now and then about a guy who mistakes a "cow" for a "buffalo". BOL in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/3/2024 10:56:00 AM
Thank you for your visit, Jim! Glad you enjoyed it! I had fun writing it! Sandra ;)

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