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The Temptress

Her smile and eyes Relay an open invite Dressed to ensnare Her looks leave them Openly ogling None of this is accidental She claims she does this For herself not for them A spider’s web made As a lovely reclining bed For its lovely owner The seductive spider (ACKMI LUIS 2016)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/27/2016 5:36:00 AM
I hate spiders, but you've made me have kinda soft spot for them, lol. A fine piece you've penned, bro!! ;-)
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 9/6/2016 2:19:00 AM
Thank you Teddy .. ;-)
Date: 8/4/2016 6:28:00 AM
Let's hope she's not a black widow and eats her man alive... wonderful lines you wove Lewis:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Lewis Nyaga
Date: 8/19/2016 4:45:00 AM
Thank you Jan.. lets hope so ;-)

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