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The Story of Man

At rising dawn of man we were acquainted with the flame Then our clockwork devices channeled nature's force made tame But there is one more energy which flies in a realm higher Once love is harnessed we shall have again discovered fire

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/9/2018 6:08:00 AM

Man always did have a fascination with fire . Another great write, Have a great day

Carolyn Fish
Date: 11/9/2018 10:26:00 AM

thanks :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 6/2/2017 1:42:00 PM

Hi Carolyn , nice to meet, beautiful write:)))hugs from Ireland

Carolyn Fish
Date: 6/3/2017 3:17:00 PM

Thanks :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2017 9:21:00 PM

Nice write, Carolyn!

Carolyn Fish
Date: 1/18/2017 9:18:00 PM

Thank you!

Mark Martin

Date: 1/13/2017 12:15:00 PM

If only there were technology to harness love. Congrats on your win Carolyn! :-)

Carolyn Fish
Date: 1/13/2017 1:21:00 PM

Thank you!

Pikin Amerasb

Date: 1/12/2017 5:22:00 AM

hustles

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/11/2017 4:37:00 AM

Indeed! Love this, Carolyn ... may love's fire warm the world! Keep up the great work! :-)

Carolyn Fish
Date: 1/11/2017 9:04:00 AM

Thank you! Love has a deep power that we only mildly grasp.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/11/2017 3:01:00 AM

Thought inspiring. Very nice. Congratulations on your win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann

Carolyn Fish
Date: 1/11/2017 9:05:00 AM

Thank you!