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Contest: I Am Snow 

Sponsor: Tania Kitchin 

Now let me share my shivery story, With random revelations shed some light - Though I’m a dazzling glow but no glory, I’m much more than white mesmerising sight. I know around the globe I’m frowned upon, Shoved aside as a cold-blooded downfall. Frosty and I, my boon companion - Both ephemeral whims of Nature’s call. The poignant part that’s so freezin’ unfair, Snowbirds and geese leave sweet homeland behind, And what the hail, even a grizzly bear Under my frozen fist checks out to hide. I’m well aware that cars are going nuts, When on black ice wheels spin out of control, I’m traffic’s curse and drivers hate my guts - Apologies for my heavy downfall. Still silver lining’s part of every cloud - I’m not warm and affectionate as such, My visage after I’m shovelled and plowed Morphs into cool and captivating touch. Though I’m made up of many a snowflake - Floating frigid and fragile to adore, I swear and say for elves and Santa’s sake - There is white substance to my melting core. I’m seasonal and thus a treasured treat, I’m well equipped and sell extremely well: Without my gifts, apart from slush and sleet, Would be no sleighs, no skis, no NHL. I’m a commodity just so you know, When you can’t smell the roses, seize the snow! Let winter’s inhibition cover go - And Let it glow! Let it glow! Let it glow!

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Date: 4/7/2024 10:22:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on another win. I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful "Snow And Tell" Personification write again. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 4/5/2024 7:16:00 PM
Margarita, a fun and creative poem, enjoyed the humor, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 3/31/2024 10:55:00 AM
Loved your humor, another great personification! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/26/2024 5:33:00 AM
Thanks for the invite, Snow, but I think I'll leave you to the northerners! A belated congrats on POTD, Maggie. WARM hugs.
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Date: 3/26/2024 5:37:00 AM
Thank you John, I will take warm in any form! XO
Date: 3/25/2024 7:27:00 AM
A fun personification with a play on words throughout. Congratulations on POTD Margarita! :)
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Date: 3/25/2024 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Linda.
Date: 3/25/2024 6:09:00 AM
I enjoy a snowfall but haven’t seen even flakes lately! Congratulations on POTD, Margarita!
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Date: 3/25/2024 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 3/25/2024 12:22:00 AM
Top of the mornin' to ya, congratulations on your poem of the day, well deserved and beautifully composed . Daniel
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Date: 3/25/2024 12:38:00 PM
Thanks Daniel. Warm surprise this snow turned out:)
Date: 3/24/2024 10:18:00 PM
Very lovely poem, Margarita:) congratulations on POTD:)
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Date: 3/25/2024 12:38:00 PM
Thank you, Joanna.
Date: 3/24/2024 7:30:00 PM
Even though snow is ' seasonal and a treasured treat. ' Many don't like the mess it makes, and I can understand that. However, I love knowing that each snowflake is different and unique. Just like we are. When it does snow in world, which is a rare occasion. It's beautiful to behold, indeed. Congratulations Margarita, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/25/2024 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Brandy.
Date: 3/24/2024 1:12:00 PM
I will never look at snow the same way again ! Snow's Curriculum Vitae is impeccable. Well done. Surely this is best for the win. Congrats on your POTD
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Date: 3/24/2024 1:20:00 PM
Thank you, adds a volume!
Date: 3/24/2024 10:56:00 AM
Wow Margarita, I've looked at snow from both sides now! to paraphrase Joni Mitchell from Winnipeg. I get your snow drift, so cool, crisp and shimmering. Loved it, Robert!
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Date: 3/24/2024 11:36:00 AM
Thank you, Robert. Now I know it all about snow:)
Date: 3/24/2024 10:13:00 AM
Indeed, winter is a valuable "commodity!" Without hibernation nature has insomnia and every other season suffers. Love the play on words, personification - "what the hail." Such originality and fun! Have to admit I do love winter, even it's downsides of slick roads, frigid temperatures and barrenness! Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings to you!
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Date: 3/24/2024 11:38:00 AM
Thank you, Sam. I cope with it, roads being least favourite aspect :)
Date: 3/24/2024 10:00:00 AM
I enjoyed your Personification poem, "Snow and Tell". Congratulations on your POTD honor, Margarita! Enjoy your special day on recognition. Bill
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Date: 3/24/2024 11:39:00 AM
Thank you, Bill. Dealing with blizzard of nice comments indeed:)
Date: 3/24/2024 9:46:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on receiving POTD. Well deserved. I loved this personification
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Date: 3/24/2024 9:51:00 AM
Thank you again!
Date: 3/24/2024 8:07:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Wonderful write
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Date: 3/24/2024 9:02:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 3/24/2024 8:06:00 AM
Hello Maggie:) Congratulations on POTD honors. Wonderful personification of winter with a touch of humor. Great to see your work appreciated. Keep writing. You are an excellent poet:)
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Date: 3/24/2024 9:02:00 AM
Thank you Daniel! When nature deals snow turn it into humour:)
Date: 3/24/2024 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful "Snow And Tell" write with a a great ending. Have a wonderful day with your win..........................
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Date: 3/24/2024 7:25:00 AM
Thank you, Paula.
Date: 3/24/2024 6:47:00 AM
Many congratulations Margarita ( lovely name) on POTD with this delightful read. This is a great personification. It’s so clever and amusing with your choice of words. The last stanza is brilliant. Really enjoyed it :):)
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Date: 3/24/2024 6:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Christina.
Date: 3/24/2024 6:22:00 AM
Dear Margarita, A very delightful journey through the wintry landscape, capturing the essence of snow in all its complexity. I loved your playful yet insightful verses unravel the multifaceted nature of this cold marvel, celebrating its beauty amidst the challenges it poses. Winning Poem of the Day is a testament to your skill in blending words into a captivating poem. Congratulations on this well-deserved honor. Margarita, keep enchanting us with your lyrical prowess. - Blessings, Daniel
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/24/2024 6:32:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel. Living in Canada helps the inspiration:)
Date: 3/24/2024 5:58:00 AM
Awesome personification. You've made a compelling case for embracing snow. Enjoy your day in the light
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Date: 3/24/2024 6:33:00 AM
Thank you Tom. Embracing every day as we speak:) Canadian
Date: 3/24/2024 5:17:00 AM
an exquisite poem certainly worthy of POTD! Congratulations on a well-written Personification poem. Thanks for your recent visit to my site. Appreciated your comments.
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Date: 3/24/2024 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 3/24/2024 5:09:00 AM
Oh how beautiful - the ending line is superb! Congratulations on your honour of POTD - your descriptive poem is simply stunning!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/24/2024 6:36:00 AM
Thank you, Malabika. All well that ends well regardless how cold:)
Date: 3/24/2024 4:36:00 AM
Lovely writing. Enjoyed. God bless you and Congrats on POTD. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/24/2024 6:36:00 AM
Thank you, Regina.
Date: 3/24/2024 4:12:00 AM
Brrr I can feel the chill in your verse Margarita, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/24/2024 6:37:00 AM
We brrr well into April:) Thank you, Tom.
Date: 3/24/2024 3:30:00 AM
- An excellent personification poem, Margarita :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/24/2024 6:39:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, might dig the snow to find Easter eggs in Canada.:)
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