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Say You'll Be Mine

Oh heart of mine be still as feathered quill like poetry Divine well paired and so consigned Oh self of innermost desire stoke me like fire and fill my hub with poetic bliss attire Oh love, oh love, my dove, fit me like a glove ! Oh joy of my soul bring forth your kiss in fervent Mesmur draw me in and sweet concur Oh jewel of my pine, be my temple nave my loyal stave that saves Oh love, oh love, my dove, your sent from up above Oh enchanted one immobile as the noon day sun steady as a rock you are, inside this wedded hand Oh lover of eyes, lips and ears make room for a rose of scented value, yes I'm yours, Oh love, oh love, my dove, fly me to the moon Oh love, oh love, my guy, please don't be shy say you'll be mine until the day we die.

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Date: 5/21/2024 7:08:00 AM
Lovely masterpiece. You get a FAV from me. May your days be filled with love overflowing; flow never yielding, not to militant beavers' dams nor sharp manufactured bends. Wild like an uninhibited, primitive forest oblivious of time and space.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/21/2024 3:53:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the poem Joe, hope you've been keeping well :)
Date: 5/20/2024 11:41:00 AM
Your heart is always open for love. A poem full of emotion. Loved it. Hugs.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/20/2024 6:14:00 PM
I try to remain open hearted Victor
Date: 5/20/2024 8:40:00 AM
A beautiful, enchanting and heartfelt longings from the heart. Nice poem.
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Date: 5/20/2024 6:14:00 PM
Glady you enjoyed it Jay :)
Date: 5/20/2024 5:00:00 AM
Sweet longings from the heart. Much enjoyed the quest of your poem--love exudes, my friend.
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Date: 5/20/2024 6:14:00 PM
Your comments exude positivity always, :)
Date: 5/20/2024 4:44:00 AM
Dear Rose, What an enchanting and heartfelt expression of love and longing. The lyrical flow creates such a beautiful and intimate atmosphere. I loved how your poetic words captured the essence of a deep, soulful connection, and I was truly moved by the passion and sincerity in each line. It's a breathtakingly beautiful piece. A real Gem! - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/20/2024 6:13:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed the poem Daniel, have a lovely day tomorrow
Date: 5/20/2024 1:30:00 AM
A beautifully written poem, Rise. So touching and heartfelt. Have a great new week my friend.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/20/2024 3:40:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by my poetry Zyrool :)
Date: 5/20/2024 1:14:00 AM
Your title reminds me of a song i really love sweet rose! And your poem is so heartfelt and so touching! You always amaze me with how you express in such gentle delicately moving ways! This poem truly is soulful! I especially love the last lines! Best wishes for the contest.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/20/2024 3:39:00 AM
I always appreciate your visit and your insightful comments, have a great day Ink,
Date: 5/20/2024 12:50:00 AM
so lovely poem, music of the heart is the best, enjoyed yann
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 5/20/2024 3:39:00 AM
Thank you for reading the poem Yann, God bless
Date: 5/19/2024 5:36:00 PM
oh how lovely, Rose! What a great alliterative love poem. I especially liked: Oh joy of my soul bring forth your kiss in fervent Mesmur draw me in The last line reminded me of words I said to hubby Bill while we were dating--please don't be shy say you'll be mine till the day we die. I obviously was taken by your poem. have a great evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 5/20/2024 3:39:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, and that line makes it all more special now that you tell me you said it to Bill . lol, Beautiful tender soul, I bet he couldn't resist, so he married you, !

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