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Rain In Summer

The summer sky darkens, clouds begin to form, The air grows heavy, a storm is born.A gentle patter turns into a steady rain, Refreshing the earth, washing away the pain.The sun's warm glow is hidden behind the gray, But the rain brings a coolness to a hot summer day. The earth drinks deeply, the plants rejoice, As the raindrops fall, a soothing voice. Children dance in puddles, splashing with glee, The sound of rain is music, a melody. The smell of wet earth fills the air, A symphony of sights and sounds, beyond compare. In the midst of summer's heat, the rain brings relief, A respite from the sun's unyielding belief. Nature's own way of balancing the scale, As the summer rain continues to prevail.

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Date: 5/21/2024 7:28:00 AM
Awesome write adore the summer rain.
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 5/29/2024 3:46:00 AM
Thank you
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 5/21/2024 7:42:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/20/2024 9:11:00 PM
Vivid descriptors, Jeanine. Enjoyed the ebb-and-flow experience of this 'summer rain.' Kudos, Gershon
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 5/21/2024 7:42:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/20/2024 9:03:00 AM
Nice poem. You should break the poems in stanzas to have more appeal. Thanks for posting.
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 5/21/2024 7:43:00 PM
Thank you so much. I will.

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