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Pleasant Pain

Asunder have all my classical forms and themes been torn, Who tore them? Who destroyed them to bring the poem down to the earth? Yes, I did. It is I who is now cold like a fully unthawed polar ocean, No longer a wrathful wrangler, No longer bold. The neatly shaped rhyme and rhythm of verse is now Like a frail vase, clasped by a frailer fist, Falls only to get smashed on the floor To sharp smithereens. When undaunted I trotted upon them, Found my feet hued with Beautiful stains of love.

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Date: 10/13/2016 11:11:00 PM
Such interesting verse! The freedom to experiment. I love "sharp smithereens"
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Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 10/13/2016 11:23:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by and appreciating me, Kim.
Date: 9/30/2016 11:25:00 PM
I like the title..the contrast and the write. Good luck with your writes Sarban. I enjoyed this one. X]
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Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 10/1/2016 5:13:00 AM
Oh I see, Sunita! Thank you for dropping by.
Date: 9/29/2016 8:11:00 AM
Nice ... May the pain get a mountain ... May fountains issue too ...
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Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 9/29/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thank you for appreciation ..

Book: Shattered Sighs