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Pink petals

Pink petals filled the air Oh what a lovey vision Flowing gently everywhere Filling the yards And streets as well As gentle as angels Feathers they fell Unscented and so frail Unlike rain or snow Or frozen hail I felt ubiquitous In their wake My breath paused In awe for goodness sake As if within a dome Someone controlled Shaking it all My eyes did roam To the ground and Street as well For hours pink Petals surely fell

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Christina Bowring

Date: 5/12/2024 3:42:00 PM

Dear Kelli, this is such an enchanting and visually delightful read. ‘As gentle as angels’ ‘ feathers they fell’ such delicate words to describe the fragility of the petals cascading down. So well written and instills a wonderful scene into the readers mind of colour. Love the comparison of a snow globe as well - a petal globe. Really enjoyed it. Blessings to you :):)

Kelli White
Date: 5/14/2024 12:07:00 PM

Thank you very much Christina

Kelli White
Date: 5/14/2024 12:00:00 PM

Thank you very much Christina

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/3/2024 3:46:00 AM

Ah, I love the w ay you covered our imagination with sweet petals of beauty and color. Nicely done Kelli, glad your a poet like me :)

Kelli White
Date: 5/7/2024 6:41:00 AM

Thank you very much MR, Kelli

Silent One

Date: 5/1/2024 1:04:00 PM

You described it very well..

Kelli White
Date: 5/2/2024 11:06:00 PM

Thank you SO

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/1/2024 6:42:00 AM

Dear Kelli, your poetic imagery of pink petals cascading like delicate feathers fills the heart with wonder. Your poetic words show a scene of ethereal beauty, evoking a sense of awe and tranquility. I loved that amidst the flurry of petals, there's a timeless grace that captivates the soul. This exquisite moment of nature's gentle embrace. - Blessings, Daniel

Kelli White
Date: 5/2/2024 11:06:00 PM

So very kind of you Daniel

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/30/2024 5:32:00 PM

Dear Kelli, your beautiful poem reminds me of when the cherry blossom trees drop their pink petals upon the lawns along the streets. Splendid poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kelli White
Date: 5/2/2024 11:07:00 PM

You know exactly what I experienced Susan, thank you