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Out My Window

Out my window, I see so far, I see people, birds, trees and grass, I see flowers, colours and vast sky, So many things to see, and admire. I see a hope, new morning brings, I feel the comfort of the breeze, I stare at the growing glow of Sun, And I close this window on the wall. I open the window of my heart, To let the feelings and desires flow, And I carve them, and I shape them, In a poetic way, beside my window.

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Date: 6/2/2024 11:43:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/3/2024 5:45:00 AM
Beautiful and optimistic Meenakshi
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Date: 2/3/2024 1:55:00 AM
Oh, windows all over our minds, our hearts. Nicely put here, Meenakshi.
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Date: 8/28/2023 3:12:00 AM
- Beautifully written... using an open heart, Meenakshi :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 8/28/2023 9:37:00 AM
Thank you!!

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