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October

The month we both fell, Like the leaves The month you entered my life, Like the breeze The month we hummed our favourite new song, Like the tidal waves crash against the sea The month we held each other, Like a promise unspoken The month of our sleepless nights, Like wanting to never let go The month we kissed, Like the beginning of a new season The month of our final goodbye, Like a clock waiting to be stopped The both of untold confessions, Like the change of the month. ~Vani

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Date: 4/17/2024 12:29:00 PM
A very nice poem, My birthday is in October I was born 5 days after my sister's birthday. Sometimes the honeymoon period is over sooner rather than later. I'm single now and think it's not worth the headache no more. Fly solo please myself what I do where I go ect. Me and my 2 adult children prefer our own space.
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Date: 2/20/2024 3:50:00 AM
Hmm...Good one!
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Date: 2/19/2024 7:57:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/17/2024 6:08:00 AM
Nice poem connecting real life events to certain seasons. My wife and I met in October 31 years ago
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