Metamorph

Euplastic creature transforms into my skin suit pretending it's me

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Hiba Junaid

Date: 5/18/2024 6:24:00 AM

this hit. hard.

Silent One

Date: 5/18/2024 4:09:00 AM

Great use of vocabulary here... this is deep and profound... It reminds me of when we act in a way, that is not normal to our character.. this could be interpreted in many ways.... even hints of mental wellbeing.. Very clever.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/18/2024 12:31:00 AM

Dear benjamin, its always impressive when one can convey so much in just few words in on line, leaving a poetic impression so eloquently! I love the depth of what you’ve conveyed here which can be perceived im so many ways. Deeply moving one this is! “ pretending its me” that hit so hard. Pleasure reading you! Sending you light.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/17/2024 4:56:00 PM

oh my...that's terrifying. Reminds me of that 1950s movie about the "Pod People" who took over other people's bodies and minds. I was only 8 years old when I watched it; it stayed with me! Anyway, nicely done! have a pleasant evening, Sara

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 5/18/2024 3:42:00 PM

That is definitely one of my favorite movies, along with 'Altered States."