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Love Can Stay

A diamond atop gold For a love that grows not old That appears much as the dawn One might fear will not go on. Some effort will it take And some hearts will surely break But the better it will get If it lasts until sunset. 2/24/2023 Written for the Inspired by Robt Frost Poetry contest Sponsored by JCB Brul

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Date: 2/24/2023 7:39:00 AM
very well written, Stephen. Should make the winners list (IMO)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/24/2023 8:11:00 AM
I suspect if we could, we would not be posting our humble rhymes for free on the internet. LOL
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Stephen Tefft
Date: 2/24/2023 7:46:00 AM
Thank you! No way to compete with Frost, however.

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