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Part I The jailhouse can hold up to forty-thousand inmates!

PART II a new report which claims hundreds of prisoners were tortured and killed jail after being caught up in the year-long security crackdown.

How proud they put them on display Two thousand of the first of fortyk There President Bukele did say They’ll live in the jailhouse for decades he went on boasting, in jail it’s judgement day, as he held his glass of brandy toasting inmates, suspected violent gang members moved to a new mega-prison in El Salvador Transferred to the Center of Confinement of Terrorism Mixed up, unable to do any more harm to the population, it was said So why do I care about these souls, tears flowed as I read the article about thousands of prisoners, and Bukele in particular Central American country’s notorious pandillas And right then I understood why I cried Hundreds never made it to round two, que pesadillas There are the innocent ones who are denied a fair trial, it's sad to think that nothing can be done for a mother's innocent son

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Laura Bastid

Date: 9/15/2023 11:53:00 AM

If only you could read about the endless atrocities these gang members used to carry out. Beyond what you can even imagine. As a Salvadoran who once lived in constant fear & horror, I was one of millions who was forced to immigrate out of my beloved country, thinking I'd never see it again. But Bukele made it possible for us to go back safely. After a year of living here, everyone we talk to is happy we have a president who put our country in order LAWFULLY, despite the US slandering him for it.

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/9/2023 2:58:00 PM

Yes, I'm so sorry for you, Laura. I do know. It the display of these prisoners, just seems wrong, to me. I hope your life is better, wishing you only the best for your life. Stay safe. Hugs

Tom Woody

Date: 7/24/2023 11:13:00 AM

Ugh. Injustice prevails. Again. Nice poetic commentary. I hadn't heard about this

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/26/2023 2:08:00 PM

I have had in an interest in politics, and I know most do not, but it is one of the poem type choices! :)

Constance La France

Date: 7/21/2023 9:53:00 AM

Anaya, powerful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge J Words !

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/26/2023 2:06:00 PM

Thank you, Constance for the placement for your challenging A thru Z Words Contests-Everyone looks forward to them!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/11/2023 12:29:00 PM

- Yes, a powerful poem indeed ... almost like i regretted reading it... painfully, Anaya :( - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/11/2023 12:46:00 PM

I heard Nordic countries welcome Sweden's NATO progress!

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/11/2023 12:43:00 PM

The NGO Non-Gov Org confirmed fatalities as violent deaths. 75 cases, bodies of the victims showed signs of torture, beatings or strangulation. Others showed signs of injuries “undetermined” or “natural” causes meaning violent deaths could be higher. It's corruption. Sorry about that, Anne-Lise. Thank you, for your support and visit! xhugsx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/11/2023 2:54:00 AM

"it's sad to think that nothing can be done for a mother's innocent son" - Indeed, this is the saddest part of the judgment. Beautifully reflected and well-written. Congratulations!

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/11/2023 8:29:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj! Thanks so much for you visit.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/11/2023 12:20:00 AM

These are the countries that could put pressure on and force change. Exporter Trade (US$ Mil) Partner ....................United States ..........$2,648 ............25.84% .............................China ...........$1,470 .........14.35% ......................Guatemala ...........$1,212 ..........11.83% ..........................Mexico ............$ 940 ...... 9.17% ........................Honduras ............$ 667 ...... 6.51%

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/11/2023 12:45:00 PM

I'm glad to showcase this information, thank you, S.V. you show how much you know and care. Good for you

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/11/2023 8:28:00 AM

The rights group said it had obtained photographs and mortuary reports showing bodies with signs of “asphyxiation, [bone] fractures, significant bruising, lacerations and even perforations”. Some appeared to have died of malnutrition. Nearly half of the victims were men aged between 18 and 38. The NGO claimed some prisoners had been tortured with electric shocks.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/11/2023 12:11:00 AM

An important expose Anaya. Atrocities such as this should be brought out in the open as much as possible. Trade embargoes to such countries should be imposed by peace loving countries that deal with them. To much goes unpublished. Too much horror in the world today. You poem speaks volumes .Well Done A fave.

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/11/2023 8:26:00 AM

Thank you, SV's! In todays social media hate wars, anyone innocent can end up in this sort of system, by slandering etc. we must control our hatred. Thank you for the fave, friend.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/10/2023 10:04:00 PM

Powerful, sorrowful. A fav. Thanks for sharing. Warmest congratulations on your win, Anaya ~ God bless

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/11/2023 8:32:00 AM

Thank you, US! God bless

Bill Baker

Date: 7/8/2023 4:42:00 PM

Well said Anaya, it is indeed a tragedy when there is no fair rule of law. It hurts my soul, my friend. Thanks for sharing your meaningful thoughts with us through your mindful poetry. Write On! Bill

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/9/2023 6:04:00 PM

These are boastings of leader's who must make decisions to save themselves, for they are corrupted themselves. I will recommend the movie "The Inmate" dubbed but bearable, you will learn something, Bill thanks for your friendship--friends forever! Tell Sarah hi :D

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/8/2023 2:28:00 PM

A powerful write/picture. Have a blessed weekend...............

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/8/2023 3:24:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 7/7/2023 8:41:00 PM

Man judges with his own personal agenda....or go scot-free despite evidence that should condemn him. A profound poem, Anaya.

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/8/2023 9:35:00 AM

So much corruption Victor, it's heartbreaking and just doesn't seem right that they are put on display like cattle. Thank you!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/7/2023 8:21:00 PM

Heartbreaking write.. well done.

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/8/2023 9:32:00 AM

Thank you, Eve! So much corruption, I don't know what to believe, and it breaks my heart. Btw Eve, I want to thank you for your generosity of including me in your book, congratulations and much success to you. I will be purchasing a book today and am so excited! :)