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In Line for the Bathroom

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Fido took time watering the large tree Forced to stand in line at dog park to pee Fidgeting they can't hold it Fearing to move they all sit A pet peeve, with bladder concern; knock-knee 5/1/2024

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/8/2024 9:15:00 AM

These poems have been fun to read. I think this might be my favourite so far.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/7/2024 10:40:00 AM

very funny indeed Eve andI am thrilled we both used the name Fido lol, hugs Jan xx

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/5/2024 6:15:00 PM

Eve, this made me laugh, great entry! Pet-peeve ..lol. hugs~Anaya

Tony Hargreaves

Date: 5/3/2024 8:45:00 AM

Methinks the dog has a prostate issue. I know the problem. Tony.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/2/2024 3:14:00 AM

Loved your poem. Great limerick with a wonderful imagination. Best for a win, my friend. Hugs.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/1/2024 11:03:00 PM

Cute. Loved how it goes with the photo. Hope all is well, dear.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/1/2024 10:05:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun "Dog" write. I hate long bathroom lines. "Good Luck." Looks like we both did this fun one.….. Have a fun day playing outside...............

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/1/2024 6:52:00 AM

Dear Eve, your witty depiction of the canine conundrum at the dog park made me smile. Your playful rhymes capture the shared frustration of both dogs and owners alike as they navigate the trials of bladder control and waiting in line. Your clever wordplay adds an extra layer of amusement to the scene. Thanks for sharing this lighthearted moment! - Blessings, Daniel

Eve Roper
Date: 5/1/2024 8:27:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words, Daniel. Eve

Deb M

Date: 5/1/2024 12:02:00 AM

Great poem great picture Eve! How on earth did they get the dogs to stay in line for that Ha!! Debx

Eve Roper
Date: 5/1/2024 8:28:00 AM

Thank you, Deb. I can relate to the picture :)