Cold Moon

on a winters night the cold moon magically casts spells casting silver shadows in her cool light crystal clear into deep waters one falling star shining dust trails winking sparkles mixing lonely potions with interwoven emotions love powers feelings wishing the heart away dazzling magic kisses embraces her light sweet music plays nestled in a field of deep echoes written upon stone foundations on the hill of forgotten dreams golden ascending greatness opens the heart door awakening love a star shining magically alone into one dream dawning this night spent alone snows upon reality looking down wamly a cold moon this Christmas

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/15/2013 10:48:00 PM

This poem is so beautiful, yet there is a slight sadness to it. Sometimes, the holidays can bring us sadness, when those we love are not with us. This was a very touching and heartfelt write, Liam. Wonderful work, as always!...Thank you very much for the great comments, my friend!

Shanity Rain

Date: 12/11/2013 7:00:00 PM

incredible, written so unique with the signature of truth in the poet.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/11/2013 5:02:00 AM

- I think we need more love in this time of the year ...... cold and dark days. - A beautiful poem as always Liam. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/11/2013 12:20:00 AM

Aw that music written on stone foundations of forgotten dreams..Very sentimental..and that cold moon this Christmas gives me a feeling of solitude..Hope stars warm.your night from a distance.Somehow I feel a mixture of emotions..Sad and beautiful.

Ken Carroll

Date: 12/10/2013 3:24:00 PM

Hey buddy, another awesome romantic write my good friend.. Ken

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/10/2013 12:46:00 PM

How magical....your words capture pictures...Lovely, Liam. Very lovely....