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Alone With Me

Thoughts creeping that usual hustle that disturbing bustle a world of no void! How I need to sense the one inside that is vibrant and intense to disconnect an ever connected soul sponge off every speck of thought and over.. start with a fresh heart of empty rooms a quiet mind no seeing, no hearing no voice silently thinking.. How can I harmonize a body of no fruit a stem of no root a colour of no hue a mind of no view a silence of no sound a heart of no bound! How I need to escape a world and be into my very world and be me outside what is inside me and just be alone only with me.

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Valsa George

Date: 1/2/2022 3:27:00 AM

Hi Besma, every now and then we are beset with thoughts vagrant and scenes upsetting which disturb our quietude. At times we long for a kind of serene silence. Though man is a social being and is gregarious, he/she seeks solitude to commune with the internal spirit, to delve deep into the core of his/her mind, forgetting the corporeal existence and extract gold from tons of black ore. Loneliness is despicable, but solitude is blissful . A great poem Besma

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/5/2022 11:16:00 AM

Words of insight! soul of beauty! graceful presence, dear Valsa! Thank you so much for all that you add to my humble poetry! Your feedback is truly a reward and a delight.. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/25/2020 3:24:00 PM

How deep are the feelings expressed in this poem of yours, Dear Poet! "Be alone/only with me" - delving deep inside our heart, perhaps we find ourselves!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/26/2020 12:45:00 AM

As deep we dig, a new understanding.. a new state of feel.. a different frame of mind is obtained.. we need to reach that state of utter disconnection from what tether the soul.. happy I am with your graceful presence, Malabika! Thank you so much for your deep thoughts and kind words. My deepest regards and blessings.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/18/2020 4:34:00 PM

What a beautiful way to express these lovely thoughts of yours, Besma! To be alone, but certainly far from being lonesome. Probably those are your most productive moments, when distractions are kept at bay. ~ Warm regards and blessings, my friend. // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/19/2020 5:36:00 AM

We need a peaceful state of heart and a lot of void into the mind to allow the soul to connect with unseen inspiration.. We all long for precious moments in time! Thank you so much, Paul, for your so beautiful comments.. you inspire great empathy and wisdom.. always a great pleasure reading your wonderful poetry and insightful feedbacks. My deepest regards and blessings.

Justin Bordner

Date: 4/10/2020 9:18:00 PM

"Thoughts creeping that usual hustle that disturbing bustle..." your emotions remind me of mustangs galloping hard and far across barren mesa with a violent sky behind them, running with strength and grace to beat the storm. There exists an odd rustle in reclusion, it's the clawing and scraping made by the heart to express itself vibrantly. You make self love intense Poetess...Justin

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/12/2020 2:24:00 PM

The soul does enjoy being on her own, a loner! Humbly knowing and admiring her worth.. thank you so much for so unique a response to my humble thoughts, Justin! Thank you so much. My deepest regards and blessings.

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/29/2020 4:06:00 PM

My dearest Besma, I am, as always and with deep appreciation, drawn into the deep feelings of the introspective well of your creative spirit, your loving heart and your all-embracing soul. My being relates to the intrinsic longing you express and my emotions respond to your beautiful artistry revealing your need for escape and disconnect from the disturbing bustle for a space of personal peace, peace of mind. How do we harmonize that which is within and without? So vivid and thought provoking is your wondrous artwork of luscious words, dear soul sister. A profound poem for your ardent reader to ponder over and again. A great masterwork of creative emotional expression and a treasured FAV for me! I love the Rassouli painting too! Warmest wishes, love and hugs, dear poetess.. be safe and healthy always.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 3/30/2020 4:22:00 PM

An Artist of fine Art and heart! An eloquent mind and an amazing soul, dearest Susan! What an awesome response from an outshining ardent reader! You do not just read my humble words but you also boards higher dimensions.. my sweet soul sister! How grateful I am to you for so a bright feedback! Blessed I am to have such a great poetess and Artist who dive into my humble poetry and honour me with so awarding a review! Thank you so much from the bottom of my heart for being so generous and kind! Your presence is highly treasured.. Stay always safe and happy. Blessings. Love and hugs.

Silent One

Date: 3/28/2020 9:52:00 AM

To be at peace with the world we need to be at peace with onself.... We need to go deep inside ourselves to find that place...Deep and emotive poetry.... Excellent as always.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 3/29/2020 9:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Silent One for your profound thoughts and your elevating compliment.. always a great pleasure receiving your support and encouragement. My deepest regards and blessings.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/27/2020 11:49:00 PM

You are peace, softness and understanding. The gentle rhyme and reason of moments divine. When all the world is quiet, or when all the world moves at lightening speed. You are the calm through it all. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Your heart is golden, my dear sweet friend. Many blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 3/29/2020 9:28:00 AM

Sweet Brandy, how tender are your words! How inspiring is your feel! receiving such an enlivening response is a true treat and a precious reward! Thank you so much from the depth of my heart for your generosity and kindness! Deeply touched and humbled. My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/27/2020 2:50:00 AM

just very very very beautiful.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 3/27/2020 7:30:00 AM

Thank you so much for your sincere words, Arthur! Honoured and pleased by your presence and praising feedback! Take care. My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/26/2020 8:18:00 AM

Reflections of a mind that yearns for peace and harmony. Great write that evokes human introspection...How can I harmonize a body of no fruit a stem of no roota colour of no hue a mind of no view a silence of no sound a heart of no bound! A deep write, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 3/27/2020 7:19:00 AM

A great pleasure reading your profound and honouring feedback, dear Vijay.. always an immense pleasure receiving your great support and encouragement.. blessed and safe always be.. thank you so much.. Best wishes and regards.