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A Love Letter

It was a new dawn, a new day, a new beginning for me - When dazzling sunlight hit the wavering pond like gold dust, dissipating the mist as silver swirls into thin air. You emerged from the shimmering gilded ripples like a paragon of beauty with your full bloomed youth. Your face like a dollop of sunshine itself, creamy-white skin tinted with pastel-pink blush and that gleaming sheen accentuated each curve of your delicate body. You gracefully floated on water with flair as your satin emerald drape twirled, smudging your reflection on watery mirror booth and then you exuded the sweetest perfume I have ever smelled which pervaded the breeze and my whole being felt a soothing sensation. Hopping and jumping I made my way to have a closer look at you, with a single glance I saw my reflection too and then I saw how you were being flattered by your playful mates in the wind and water. Their iridescent wings and fins, those vibrant colors, I couldn't have match up to their looks or skills. Soon that lovely feeling of being love-struck was singed by the hot sparks of anger and then turned into cold ashes of dejection. Oh beauteous lotus, you are my first true love but alas, I am just an ugly toad with no-good longing for you. Life couldn't contain me and death couldn't release me but this letter enveloped in my everlasting love is the only requiem for my soul to be with you forever. (CroaK-quee-ki-quee-CroaK!) Date: 11/06/2017 Note: For the contest (Love Letter) by Viv Wigley. *Placed First*

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Date: 11/26/2017 8:29:00 AM
Ace, I love it
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Date: 11/26/2017 11:19:00 PM
Thank you, Moses. Welcome to PS, my best regards.
Date: 11/15/2017 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win. A lovely descriptive write, Best, SuZ
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Date: 11/16/2017 3:10:00 AM
Thank you, Suzanne.
Date: 11/14/2017 9:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st place win Afzal with this great love poem! It's amazing how you convey your ideas and emotions in the most imaginative way :-)
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Date: 11/16/2017 3:09:00 AM
Thank you for such kind words, Elaine.
Date: 11/14/2017 2:11:00 AM
Afzal, a gorgeous write. Poor misguided love affair.
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Date: 11/16/2017 3:09:00 AM
Thank you, James.
Date: 11/13/2017 6:55:00 PM
"Life couldn't contain me and death couldn't release me" a winner indeed! Congratulations! I'm ure you could make a lotus swoon, be thee a toad or not :)
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Date: 11/13/2017 10:12:00 PM
Well I don't know that but I'm glad you liked it, Maureen. Thanks for such kind words.
Date: 11/13/2017 6:28:00 PM
what wonderful personification Afzal congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/13/2017 10:11:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Jan.
Date: 11/13/2017 8:03:00 AM
Beautiful, Afzal, congratulations
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Date: 11/13/2017 10:11:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Mike.
Date: 11/13/2017 6:14:00 AM
Wow! Another beauty, Afzal , many congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 11/13/2017 10:10:00 PM
Thank you, Jo.
Date: 11/13/2017 6:06:00 AM
Congrats on your lovely write, Afzal, you should be very proud of it. Regards, Viv
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Date: 11/13/2017 10:10:00 PM
Viv, thank you so much for honoring me with 1st place. I really enjoyed writing for this contest. Huggs :~)
Date: 11/13/2017 5:15:00 AM
WOW this write is amazing! Your descriptive terminology, the passion behind your words, down to the humor in the last line of toad language! Congrats my feiend
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Date: 11/13/2017 10:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Brian.
Date: 11/8/2017 4:57:00 AM
A personification with a difference. I really love it. The last 5 lines just wow!! my friend. Good luck in the contest..Maria
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Date: 11/8/2017 10:23:00 PM
Thank you very much, Maria.
Date: 11/6/2017 8:16:00 AM
An exceptional Personification poem, Afzal. So detailed w/such emotional breadth. I thought it was a swan, but it was a lotus flower. Very clever write. Your mastery of language is off the chain. Wonderful poem, it was such a joy to read this morning. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 11/6/2017 10:23:00 PM
Thank you, Freddie. Glad you liked it.

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