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1/12/2021 9:16:29 PM
mike porter Posts: 10
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My Words sweetly sweep. across her ear lobes. into her canals beating against Her tightly stretched drums to lingering memories of past pleasures beyond any treasures and never any successors for my words are the sweetest and the deepest that enters her canals
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