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9/28/2020 12:27:46 AM
Mark Anthony Bartolo Posts: 1
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I Smiled I smiled when I’ve gone for a drink Sitting on a couch for some tunes I smiled when I’d no time to think Because of last-minute fortunes Pity I had no time to greet The gleaming bright light on your teeth My sight was never left behind By the guest with her child in mind I smiled when you’ve watched me perform I smiled when you’ve killed these perils I smiled when you’ve read my profile I smiled when you’ve kept me in peace Therefore, I have no dark regrets Of playing those grateful poets edited by Mrk345yij on 9/28/2020
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