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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
5/3/2019 12:14:36 PM

Joy Adetunji
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I long for something
I know not what it is;
I quest for something,
I know not how to get!

Maybe a lifetime
Twill cost to acquire;
Or maybe a dime
I'll need to procure;

Come unravel this mystery
Save me form this unknown misery
edited by Joy Adesola on 5/3/2019
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