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1/16/2019 2:09:45 PM
levi johnson Posts: 10
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The Belly of Being
Let your dreams infuse you quake you remake you Change your world in design in purpose in entirety
Reverse your history of mistakes of thought of existing
Become larger than life to wisdom to compete to survive
Carve your personality in motions in minds in stone
Preserve your destiny of identity of being of rebirth
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1/16/2019 3:49:17 PM
Susan Jeavons Posts: 5
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Levi, this sounds like a plan, also a list poem. But I'm not sure. I like the flow and the positive attitude the whole poem exudes.
-- Susan Maree Jeavons
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