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10/26/2017 5:04:44 AM
Michael Hayward Posts: 9
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I can I will protect you, from the evil in this world.
I will always catch you, whenever you fall in life, or on your bum.
I will guide you, which path's best to take and choices to make.
I will adore you, everyday for the rest of my life.
I will encourage you, to succeed in life and do the best you can.
I will comfort you and give you peace, when you feel down and can't carry on anymore.
I will provide the very best for you, all the day's of you're life.
I will love you, forever and always since the beginning of time.
But I can't do any of these things, so I will ask the One who can.
I pray that God will surround you with His favor as with a shield, Amen. edited by Veldmarskalk on 10/26/2017 edited by Veldmarskalk on 10/26/2017 edited by Veldmarskalk on 10/26/2017
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