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6/19/2017 8:09:29 PM
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Moron
What is wrong with that Holden?! All he does is watch me scratch my bare chest, cut my toe nails, as he goes on about Jane or Jean or whatever her name is: his damned girl crush he played checkers with. What the hell has he been thinkin’, dreamin’ about, some young woman I barely made out with, he couldn’t even write me a simple paper for class. He wasn’t even in the room, writing about some baseball glove his emo brother covered with poetry. That damned guy, Holden, he’s too young to be jealous of boyhood crushes and lookin’ at men who are not concerned about his skinny, whining, pasty pud goin’ on about giving women the time they want. I’m sure what’s-her-name didn’t give a crap about all her kings in the back row, just like she didn’t give a crap when I gave her Holden’s regards. She was fun to be with. We had fun in Banky’s car. I just wish we could have spread out and enjoyed ourselves more. That’s why Banky bought that big old luxury tuna boat of a car. Stupid Holden, goin’ on about his childish crush, his voice breaking up and getting high, I wanna punch him, firm and easy on the shoulder. I’ll keep swingin’, keep making him act like a big baby without any titty to put in his mouth. Whoa!!! That little fart! He hit me on the side of my head! There, you bastard! Now bleed! I can punch too! Oh man. He’s expelled. He has nothing to lose. What if he reports me to the principle and they take him seriously. All he does is call me moron; moron, that’s all he says, he won’t shut the hell up, even after I clouted him good! Now he just looks in the mirror, wearing that stupid red hat, with tears running down his blood covered face. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- If you are intrigued by this work read and review G. D. Master’s book,“Interpretations,” free in PDF format on SmashWords.com. Enter “gd master” or“interpretations” in the search bar of SmashWords to find it.
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