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11/13/2015 8:57:19 AM
K.M North Posts: 97
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it was this and then it was that
then we moved back and forth
and the wind shook us to and fro
and back again
because when we wanted to be that
we realized we will always be this
and sometimes that's just all we will be
but for not you be you
and I'll be me
and we'll see just what we want to see
cause I'm either this or that
but for now I'll be the
and you can call it whatever you want
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12/2/2015 8:54:37 AM
K.M North Posts: 97
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Hey Michael, totally trying to be just a pain in the rear end of a fellow poster on here who think he knows everything about poetry. Basically I just wanted to write a poem of his "no" words
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