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10/21/2014 9:38:02 PM
Gabe Shelly Posts: 95
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Lady, I cry, and I cry, and I cry For I want you to want me-- And I shudder when I look into your eyes Fall all I see is Beauty
(And I can see me inside thee)
10/9/'14 edited by Gabe on 10/21/2014
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