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1/11/2011 9:16:59 AM
Abby Pe Posts: 2
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My little Flower, Why do you weep, In your perfect existence? Did you finally relies The corruption at the ties? My silly sorrowful flower I cry with you, For your perfectly misguided existence. Why did you choose to bloom In such wretched soil? My little flower Why do you weep? Why do you search for corruption? When all is well it seems? Silly little flower All you will find is a heart full of ache. So, I too will cry As your final bloom Ends your perfectly misguided existence. My little flower I know for whom you weep As my tears return to me. Silly little flower Why do you weep for me? edited by AbbyLee on 1/11/2011
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