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12/29/2010 2:59:25 AM
Eiken Laan Posts: 10
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Afterthe thaw birds swim the sky wings outstretched, exuberant warmed by a light drizzle falling on pear soaked fields they drink in a saturated land
Gliding from Cedar to Spruce great canopies of army green, the gulls alight from a satin sky to branches covered in lichen where pistachio ivy clings
Sweeping over a shrouded sea liquorice birds blot the view A silver birch extends it’s arching limbs as blackbirds gather rejoicing on a melting morning edited by Eiken on 12/29/2010 edited by Eiken on 12/29/2010
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