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6/6/2013 10:20:34 PM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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A wedding is about the bride and groom So why does everyone jump to assume That they're opinions means the bible It's mothers and daughters that createthis vicious cycle
Moms want to throw their daughter thebest day ever They're reluctant to think their dreams aren't the brides endeavor Its one day in life With all strings attached My energy sure feels the bite
No matter how hard you try, People flake or become insane You begin to wonder, why?
Then Eloping doesn't sound so mad All that matters is the bride walks down the isle with the dad The groom takes her hand A strong love is witnessed and spread across the land.
Daughters keep your head and will strong It's about you and the groom, That's where the power belongs Don't let other steal your focus The moment you say “no” Treasured friendships may become bogus
Everyone else, keep your mouth shut Wish there was a nicer way to say this, I'll just be blunt Doesn't matter what you think or do For once in your life, This day isn't about you! edited by svlynn18 on 6/6/2013
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