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11/8/2012 12:03:57 PM
Rory Clark Posts: 2
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Resting in the dark, soon to stir and waken the yearnings of my heart the walls are left still shaken
Dawn brings new life and banishes the old the day may yet bring more strife May yet leave hope in the cold
Targets for the day just another morning routine Living according to pay Just today; postponing the dream
The sun says it is noon and the light does not tell lies Shining over shadowed room As peoples hands are tied
The day is over; Night is near No pressure; time to live the life! but my eyes grow sleepy here So tired by the light
Tomorrow is another day when ambition shall be met For now alone I lay So the cycle may reset
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