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10/15/2012 3:31:19 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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There's that moment When life's no longer about you You'll give all your love, patience,and honesty You'll be forced to balance betweenhappy and blue You'll enjoy playtime when the pillowcalls your name You'll punish and force it to makedecisions, Otherwise, you'll only have yourself toblame Any of your future aspirations mustwork around it's schedule, The messes you'll need to clean up forthis little devil, You'll be forced to be the best you canbe It's going to be smart and take ineverything you see But it'll all be worth it, There will always the moments, minutes,hours, When this sweetness will cuddle andlook you with their big eyes Speak the most powerful “I love you” That joyful love will make you cry
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