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10/14/2012 4:36:37 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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I can remember sitting in this place Looking up got a sense of disgrace No one is good enough Must drink from the water Most the people next to me forget Under the rocks outside There lies all the power His love doesn't occur once a week, Or one time or day It's in you and your actions You must exercise it to make it stay He doesn't ask that you control others He never tried to control you He gave you options Making decisions are what you have todo
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