A Celestial Dancer

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Light; a celestial dancer, pirouettes; bending and refracting, at the crossroads of fantasy and reality. Weaver of constellations, light summons dawn's blush where miracles bloom; while darkness departs at its behest; yielding to its will.

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Terry Miller

Date: 5/7/2024 3:15:00 AM

You have found the beauty within the given text and made the words shine, congratulations

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/7/2024 7:09:00 AM

Thanks, Terry; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/6/2024 7:25:00 AM

Fabulous my friend. Flow and meaning eloquently entwined. Perfect - congratulations! :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/6/2024 9:00:00 AM

Thanks, Linda; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Crystol Woods

Date: 5/5/2024 9:14:00 AM

Yess! I love this imagery and motion... sweet! Congrats

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/5/2024 9:17:00 AM

Thanks, Crystol; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Jeanette Swan

Date: 4/8/2024 6:30:00 AM

This contest is an editing challenge. You have edited the sweet points, and given them space to shine - so lovely. J :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/8/2024 7:38:00 AM

Thanks, Jeanette; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/6/2024 8:46:00 AM

Now this is perfect, Emile, sure to place high:)

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/6/2024 10:50:00 AM

Thanks, Joanna, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.