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Vow

I made a vow on a day divine To hold your hands in mine May it be rain or shine. In the years that followed the day Our hands never went astray Rather, your hand in mine led the way. In every sky of grey and blue I kept my word to you Together, we witnessed the dawn anew. In times of departed sand I am holding your resting hand While I sit in a headstone land.
20th April 2023 Contest: Writing Challenge V words Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 4/24/2023 5:44:00 AM
Akanksha, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/24/2023 8:18:00 AM
Always good to participate. Thanks for my HM
Date: 4/23/2023 3:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Ankansha.
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/24/2023 8:17:00 AM
Thank you very much!
Date: 4/23/2023 3:11:00 AM
- Congrats on your H/M, Akanksha :) - hugs
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/23/2023 3:31:00 AM
Thanks so much:)
Date: 4/22/2023 12:06:00 PM
Hi Akanksa, I echo what Daniel said. Congrats on your HM. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/23/2023 3:30:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 4/20/2023 8:41:00 AM
True love never dies:) A sad poem, Akanksha.
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Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/20/2023 9:51:00 AM
Very true! Thank you for the visit

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