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Puppys First Happy Christmas

NOTE: Soup titles are supposed to allow for apostrophes and yet I cannot get my correct title to post, so I display the title here first above the poem:
Puppy's First Happy Christmas At Christmas, our puppy followed us to the living room where he played with ribbons which littered the floor as we sat opening our Christmas presents. Then we brought out some gifts just for him! Teasing him, we slowly unwrapped a long squiggly racoon toy that squeaked when he bit its tail just right! Watching him, sat our cat nonchalantly as if to say, “Been there, silly dog. Done that.” Dec. 7, 2017 for Broken Wings' It's Christmas Time Again Contest Form 3: Nonet and Theme 2: Happy

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Date: 4/10/2018 7:05:00 PM
Too cute. What a lovely scene and so well described, Andrea.
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Date: 12/20/2017 10:49:00 AM
awwww! This will be my puppy Brady's first Christmas I'm curious to see how hard it will be to open gifts! Congrats sweet lady :) -luloo
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Date: 12/20/2017 1:44:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win. Happy Christmas.
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Date: 12/19/2017 12:21:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest, with this adorable and sweet poem, nothing more delightful than our pets at Christmas, I wonder what they are thinking ???
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Date: 12/19/2017 9:03:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea!!
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Date: 12/19/2017 7:51:00 AM
Rereading your clever, very cute poem Andrea. Enjoyed
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Date: 12/19/2017 12:43:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Andrea. Yay! ; )
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Date: 12/15/2017 8:50:00 AM
What a lovely poem! Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/13/2017 12:06:00 PM
How cute and clever. Love it. I want to write for her contest, just haven't 'muse'd about it yet, want to play with those forms. You got the catatude just right in this sweet Christmas bite. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 12/11/2017 12:31:00 AM
Cats do act so superior, don't they! A very sweet Nonet! : )
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Date: 12/10/2017 7:40:00 PM
This is so great Andrea! You are sooo talented!... and of course I love anything with animals!...nothing new for me, but I always read your latest if I have a few minutes in the soup...have a good one :)
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Date: 12/10/2017 6:15:00 PM
Just like a cat. I love this.
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Date: 12/10/2017 6:43:00 AM
This is really sweet, I have not seen a nonet in a long time..
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Date: 12/9/2017 11:49:00 PM
Joy to read...I wished I was so soft and fluent like you Andrea.
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Date: 12/9/2017 8:25:00 PM
Nice poem. Highly creative verse. Start & end match greatly. Choice of words excellent. Theme is good. Great. Arrangement of words is nice, idea is superb. Let's be in touch even more through such poems and reviews
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Date: 12/9/2017 7:55:00 AM
How cute : ))
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Date: 12/9/2017 12:44:00 AM
You made me smile.
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Date: 12/8/2017 8:09:00 PM
Nice, Andrea, my cats would be in the middle of the ribbons and paper as well. John
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Date: 12/8/2017 7:13:00 PM
Cute! I was wondering why I wasn’t able to post my title!
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Date: 12/8/2017 6:50:00 PM
People and their pets can be rather funny, good luck in the contest
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Date: 12/8/2017 4:06:00 PM
Cute Nonet Andrea, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 12/8/2017 12:05:00 PM
A fun read--loved it!
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Date: 12/8/2017 11:27:00 AM
I can just see the cat saying that, too! Very cute.
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Date: 12/8/2017 10:38:00 AM
Giggle :) cute! xomo
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Date: 12/8/2017 10:28:00 AM
What a great write Andrea!! Love happy stories about Christmas :) And so cute that your puppy gets his own present ;) ~ Judy
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