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1/7/2024 4:25:02 AM
Steven Wade Posts: 1
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First time writing in years
Hiding footsteps of lovers Stealing pockets of memories Contouring the dunes, the heath and the shrub Traversing worlds, both earth and sea Meandering streams cut into the shallows Engulfing the shore, the sand and the ashes The lovers remain Silhouettes in the distance As the wave crashes, the memories lost edited by scubaroo on 1/7/2024
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