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10/11/2022 3:43:05 PM Bob Atkinson Posts: 294	Sharpness of Her Pen -by - Bob Atkinson she stood upon that center stage to act as if she had an openness of direction through sharpness of her pen she told of laments abundant tales of woe held near her chest an oscillated aberration lost in such soft duress tried to absorb her meaning face covered by my hands alternated sobs and laughter a simple mortal man she ended with a diatribe on how he left her moods buoyed by freedom's percolation which let her find her tools to build a character of love when lover left the nest seeking a fully formed pretense which sauntered to the audience I loved here every moment although couldn't tell you why just felt as if emotion had hit me in the eye my character I questioned because she knew so well needs of the initiated past things I'll never tell the end came quite abruptly lights faltered and went out causing a gasp from audience then from them many claps tell you when I'm sober thing I did right then in reaction to her motions and the sharpness of her pen p { line-height: 115%; margin-bottom: 0.1in; background: transparent }a:link { color: #000080; so-language: zxx; text-decoration: underline }
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5/26/2023 3:48:32 PM Bob Atkinson Posts: 294	Somewhat difficult to add emotions to writing. But, the more you do it, the more you're aware of the need. "Poetry, the emotional content of literature" "Prose, the factual, or pseudo-factual content of literature"
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