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12/21/2011 6:36:48 PM
Allen Nuytens Posts: 7
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It's been a beautiful mourning as the sunrise hits the rooftops and my endless dysphoria leaves my body in a rush of cool wind that escapes our beloved river the warm air makes me quiver so please Mother earth Never leave and hold me close and remind me that life is a fragile rose Father time Wake me with a chime of blissful future and guide me toward the enlightenment that lays on the horizon
It's been a day of bliss one that I'll always miss but I've learned to forgive and forget the broken past I now want to live I want this day to last and as i open my awakening third eye and look toward the flawless sky and I await to find home without neon distractions and demeaning attractions a sanctuary not of religions path but, of enlightenment and impartiality There will be no corrupted parliament just carefulness a perfect world is a world never seen So as i roam to find a place I can call home I'll be forever grateful that i can have the ability to say that i am truly alive for the ship of madness has sank into the sea and there's only you and me So let's find what it means to be Free
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