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10/26/2020 11:11:01 AM
Nimisha Rastogi
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That long night :
There I stood in a dusk,
Wandering like a vagabond.
Finding ways to escape,
Surrounding so numb,
I fumbled.
Time was fleeting fast,
I could smell the breeze,
As it kissed my lips.
Darkness of the night,
Mocked at my sight.
In that stillness of night I stood,
The waves of trees were shaking hands.
It created a magical spell on me.
I shivered in that cold chilly night.
I escaped a beat to find ray of light.
Ah! That long night surrounded me,
With darkness all around.
My legs refused to move,
Dullness loaded alcove.
And there, I stood terrified in that long night.
Can anyone tell me which form is this.
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10/26/2020 11:11:44 AM
Nimisha Rastogi
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I request everyone to view my poem and present your opinions
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