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7/6/2019 9:07:22 PM
Terri Brahm
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My heart is filled with great sadness as I look at our world today, filled with a madness never seen before. A coldness of emotion is filling the hearts of man, which I can hardly bare to watch. Our television, movies and musical entertainment are desensitizing us of all that is reality. We are lost souls upon this earth, looking for gratification that cannot be found in ourselves. We’ve lost sight of who we were meant to be,because we’ve slowly removed our God from this world. My heart is filled with great sadness, for today I see our world lost to the greatest deceiver known to man.
edited by terrihanauerbrahm on 7/6/2019
edited by terrihanauerbrahm on 7/6/2019
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