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6/13/2019 1:33:14 PM
brittney starnes
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Hazel Happiness.
Hazel Happiness, her eyes were;
Pools of brown, green, and blue;
So enticing and inviting and warm.
Hazel Happiness, her aura was;
Bright, caring, and promising;
So intelligent and powerful and valiant.
Hazel Happiness, her presence brought;
Escorting smiles, laughter, and beams;
So uplifting and supportive and embracing.
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