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4/24/2019 3:10:36 AM
Bob Atkinson
Posts: 295
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puppies come in colors
all so warm and kind
licking skin to show affection
puppy eyes shine bright
puppies warm the coldest person
don’t chill the dark of night
no, puppies are a good thing
make our lives so nice
people come in colors too
their warmth comes from smiles
as they say “good day to you sir”
so glad you’re in my life
you see, it isn’t color
that makes a character
‘tis what they give to strangers
when passing through this world
but some believe violence
can be justified
a false assumption realized
by those without much pride
for any good religion
would eject chaff right now
and not let them use excuses
to harm a mother's child
while championing a cause
as no good cause sanctions hate
for every puppy has a color
as do also human races
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