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11/27/2017 11:02:18 AM
Donald Lee Posts: 5
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How do you write a poem When nothing really matters Should i take this one too seriously Or fill my words with laughter Just based on how i'm feeling I suppose i'll take the later
And now i’ll use a metaphor To give context to this disaster I’ll compare this to a red balloon So bright and big and growing fatter But truth be told it’s only air it’s barely even there. And everyone thinks its great And i'm not sure that why they care But i guess the balloon is still better Then never being there.
I messed up the pattern i was after. But i guess it doesn’t matter This is, after all A poem where nothing matter.
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