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9/28/2017 1:06:40 AM
Sanja Cokolic Posts: 13
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I just hit the Unicorn
fetishized lament echoed from colourfully besmeared winding sheet
devouring luminosity become my pivotal infringement vigorous luminosity
somethin' s wrong with her transcript -they said, and put me behind iron pipes
my name dawned divested and encapsulated in frame of long time inhumed language
thus soul elastane woven bends every time words clash at those indifferent barricades
this circle of life is fuc*** it cringes in parts it shouldn't
Danaans gift tried to conceal scenery of birth given screenplay they failed to excrement that light
clash became my attribution yet they didn't let me to keep any of that ordeal dust
they left me empty-handed
but emptiness brings happiness when filled outage is divergent level of melancholy
undertone of this vanity named it pain I call it a way of life you got a thousand and one battle war is mine
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