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6/11/2017 9:58:32 AM
Marian Nagy
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Glacial star
Do you remember the moment we met ?
When you pulled me out of that dark abyss of depression.
I didn't know what was going on, It was something new.
My tears of joy falling, falling in my hollowed heart.
I see those glacial eyes in my memories.
Sad, glacial eyes and under them the imitation of smile.
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