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3/17/2011 4:55:20 PM
Manouchka doreus Posts: 23
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what causes my soul to yearn for what causes me such pain?
and where is the source of the river of tears i cry?
Is it even possible that the rivalry, that the conflict i feel
is just two halves of my heart flying by?
I love him, nay, I love another.
One and both, and neither.
With my all, and nothing at all.
Is it possible that i don't love myself either?
Am I so blinded by selfish desire that who is mine is never their own? an endless warped fantasy of mindless, sensless drones? and i seek to find the only One. The One who reels me back in after I've been overblown.
Are they just a dirty gauze placed over a festering wound? All and none, and all that are around? the ones I call to when they are needed and, without a care, cast them aground?
My constant search, and lack to find, and I use and abuse and leave them behind. the pain, unbearable, the disgust with myself. A woman with many lovers, and unsound of mind.
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