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4/14/2014 1:36:25 PM
Gabe Shelly Posts: 95
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Going to work when at work I was one morning-- It was me and this old man, colored and shriveled by the sun. He was mad, crying it was me n' those "like" keeping him n' "his" down, Saying I was a "rear-hole" in a word. So surprised I was I said something I never should-- Something my father never would-- And that old man shutup like a clam
The "N" word
4/13/'14 edited by Gabe on 4/14/2014 edited by Gabe on 4/14/2014
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