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5/23/2013 4:00:41 AM
Nato Calubiran Posts: 23
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Fee fi fo fum The smell of blood and rum As on the giants abode Legends were foretold As wolves stand as packs To kill and attack A hero rises From the flames From the ashes Rise blood hunter Rise from doom Rise from scourge Rise above them all
Where people die A painful death And corpses left Stacked aside Never buried
As monsters walk Among us As the walk Goes slower And blood gets thicker By this moment you might be Yes you might be dead
With blades side by side Rise blood hunter And slay them all Rise from doom Rise from scourge Rise above them all.
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